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.Ring Around The Rosie.

 
 
 
 .Ring Around The Rosie.
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headntheclouds
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USA
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Posted - 02/03/2011 :  8:07:06 PMheadntheclouds's Poems
.Ring Around The Rosie.


Ring around the rosie,

A pocket full of pain,

As I looked around the world,

I slowly went insane.



Ring around the rosie,

A bullet made of tears,

As shotguns scream around my head,

I add this to my fears.



Ring around the rosie,

Although it's just a game,

Once you learn its meaning,

It's never played the same.

Edited by - headntheclouds on 03/28/2011 12:22:59 PM

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Ronnie Doe
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USA
21312 Posts

Posted - 02/03/2011 :  8:26:39 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
I would prefer a pocketful of posies. What a great poem.
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irisheyes
FFP Poet Laureate

3445 Posts

Posted - 02/03/2011 :  8:48:26 PMPoems by irisheyes
Good poem - always like poems that allow the reader to have more than one take on them. Good job with this one too.
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nicole55
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1273 Posts

Posted - 03/24/2011 :  8:42:31 PMPoems by nicole55
Superb job. Ring around the rosie definitely has a terrible story behind it, and i liked the second line. And the last stanza? Bone-chilling. Good job.
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headntheclouds
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
189 Posts

Posted - 03/28/2011 :  12:24:05 PMPoems by headntheclouds
This was one of the first poems I ever wrote, thanks guys, I'm glad you like it so much :)
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Stormstar1
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USA
2594 Posts

Posted - 12/02/2011 :  5:00:51 PMPoems by Stormstar1
cool. I like it. very interesting. A child's song turned into a dark and scary poem. great job.
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headntheclouds
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USA
189 Posts

Posted - 12/02/2011 :  8:01:10 PMPoems by headntheclouds
Thank you!
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