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Anthony Guerra
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Posted - 02/14/2011 :  7:37:59 PMAnthony Guerra's Poems
The dirt under my feet, soft and sound,
The air that I breath, clean and refreshing,
This scene that I see, chaos and pain.

A calm night in the war, he was my best friend,
The shots rang out random, we were not prepared,
Shooting back quickly, we took cover in the hut,
But he was not there.

Back out I ran, screaming his name,
I heard his voice and ran to him,
He handed me a note, a goodbye to lost love,
His eyes went blank, a good friend gone.

I ran blindly into the night, shooting with my rage,
I heard my name yelled, never looking back,
Took them down myself, the pain overbearing,
That note handed to his mother myself, that is a fact.

Poem Written By: Anthony S Guerra.

Author's Notes: Written about a true story of one of my best friends who served in Iraq.

Edited by - Anthony Guerra on 02/14/2011 7:39:16 PM

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Dark_Knight
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
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Posted - 02/14/2011 :  9:50:31 PMPoems by Dark_Knight
Anthony,
You did an exceptional job
writing and expressing the pain and
loss of a friend. I am sorry about
your friend. Great write, keep posting.
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