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I am Sorry Dad

 
 
 
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Naveeed Iqbal
FFP Rookie

Pakistan
13 Posts

Posted - 07/02/2011 :  06:56:32 AMNaveeed Iqbal's Poems
I am sorry Dad……

For not being able to see all your love and care
You were like the Sun that always glow
Filled our lives with warmth and tenderness
Like a shining Star and the wind that blows

I am sorry Dad……

For not being able to say all that should’ve been said
Many a times I kept it thinking that you’ll always be here
To guide me teach me, hold me and give me strength
Now that you have gone I feel so lost and have so much to fear

I am sorry Dad……

For all those who were like your child and left you in your time
Although deeply hurt, filled with anger but I do not mind
Coz in time they will see, sooner or later they will realize
A Brother, a Father, a Friend, a Mentor like you will be hard to find

I am sorry Dad……

For taking it all so easy, for being so close yet so apart
Thank you for everything coz what I am is because of you
No words can say what I really feel but still I want you to know
Till the end of time you’ll be in my heart and I’ll always love you

Edited by - Naveeed Iqbal on 06/24/2013 4:40:39 PM

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Truthfollower
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
12065 Posts

Posted - 07/02/2011 :  07:30:03 AMPoems by Truthfollower

Very touching poem, & easy 10 for you,

Welcome to a wonderul place to share.
It's like a family here, I've only been
here since January 18th, so am kind of
new as far as being on only a few months.

God bless,

Love, Big Sis Patty :)
(Truthfollower)
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Naveeed Iqbal
FFP Rookie

Pakistan
13 Posts

Posted - 07/02/2011 :  08:16:45 AMPoems by Naveeed Iqbal
Thank You, my first time today and just wanted to express my feelings.
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Vickerz
FFP Freshman

USA
91 Posts

Posted - 07/02/2011 :  11:48:40 PMPoems by Vickerz
Did your father pass away?
I know how that is, mine did just last year.
It's hard to embrace, but coping by poetry is a great way.
I really liked your work, it was awesome. :)
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black-lover
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
357 Posts

Posted - 07/02/2011 :  11:53:45 PMPoems by black-lover
really nice...pm me if u want to talk :)

Edited by - black-lover on 07/02/2011 11:54:24 PM
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Naveeed Iqbal
FFP Rookie

Pakistan
13 Posts

Posted - 07/03/2011 :  05:27:22 AMPoems by Naveeed Iqbal
Yeah, my father passed away recently on 19th June 2011...:(
these words are my exact feelings...... i am not into poetry though.
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keisha_writer
FFP Moderator

USA
4820 Posts

Posted - 07/04/2011 :  6:15:35 PMPoems by keisha_writer
wow very touching. This poem reminds me to cherish my father even though he hasn't always been there. I really need to improve on respecting my dad because he is not guaranteed tomorrow. Wonderful poem about your dad. I am sure he is very proud.
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Naveeed Iqbal
FFP Rookie

Pakistan
13 Posts

Posted - 07/05/2011 :  03:24:38 AMPoems by Naveeed Iqbal
Thanks......all i can say is that cherish those who are around you and especially Mom and Dad, no one can replace them. I have lost both of them and I know how it feels as if a big part of me have been lost.
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keisha_writer
FFP Moderator

USA
4820 Posts

Posted - 07/05/2011 :  1:35:13 PMPoems by keisha_writer
you are so right. i promise to do my best and respect my mom and dad. I don't want to lose them.
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Antonia
FFP Poet Laureate

Camaroon
1609 Posts

Posted - 07/05/2011 :  2:26:50 PMPoems by Antonia
This is so touching. I can only imagine how it feels to lose both parents.
Your poem's making me think of how i sometimes take mine for granted.
I guess i've got to make them know how much i care before they go and i regret.
nice poem.
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Naveeed Iqbal
FFP Rookie

Pakistan
13 Posts

Posted - 07/05/2011 :  2:41:20 PMPoems by Naveeed Iqbal
You are right Antonia, we usually become so busy in our lives that we start to take our love ones around us for granted. There comes a time when we realize and regret but mostly its too late. So make them feel important and cherish the precious gifts that God has given us in the form of Family and Friends.
You too Keisha.
Tc
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Caboverdish
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1024 Posts

Posted - 07/06/2011 :  7:18:04 PMPoems by Caboverdish
Those are really heart felt words. Whether you are into poetry or not. That is what poetry is. I'm sorry for the loss of your father. I believe if he is with God. He is happy and he will know exactly how you feel. And he will be loving you also. Because everything is forgiven when you are with the Lord.
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Brooklyns Angel
FFP Poet Master

586 Posts

Posted - 07/06/2011 :  7:21:31 PMPoems by Brooklyns Angel
love it i can relate to it about my dad
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Naveeed Iqbal
FFP Rookie

Pakistan
13 Posts

Posted - 07/07/2011 :  03:37:12 AMPoems by Naveeed Iqbal
Thank you Caboverdish and Angel too.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/09/2011 :  7:50:04 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Naveeed, welcome to the forum. I thank you so much for sharing a poem a lot of people can relate to. A lot of us take our parents for granted until it's too late. It's sad that saying "I'm sorry" or "I love you" comes so hard for so many people. thanks for sharing. I hope you continue to do so in the future.
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Naveeed Iqbal
FFP Rookie

Pakistan
13 Posts

Posted - 07/10/2011 :  2:43:38 PMPoems by Naveeed Iqbal
Thank you Ronald for the encouraging comments and very rightly said.
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Abheet Sachdeva
FFP Poet Master

India
553 Posts

Posted - 06/24/2013 :  1:03:15 PMPoems by Abheet Sachdeva
Naveed this is a wonderful poem in all aspects...
Not only is it heartfelt but also is wonderfuly constructed....
Loved the rhyme scheme....
Fabulous...!!.
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Naveeed Iqbal
FFP Rookie

Pakistan
13 Posts

Posted - 06/24/2013 :  4:44:23 PMPoems by Naveeed Iqbal
Thank You Abheet, these words are my true feelings.
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