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Garden Hose (Haiku)

 
 
 
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windowguy
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 08/19/2011 :  12:24:57 PMwindowguy's Poems
Seemingly alive
As pressurised water flows
Green snake in the grass?


Edited by - windowguy on 06/24/2014 12:01:18 PM

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nicole55
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Posted - 08/19/2011 :  6:55:12 PMPoems by nicole55
This reminded me of a cute little story about a snake who mistook a garden hose for another snake.
I really liked it, windows!
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Ronnie Doe
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USA
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Posted - 08/21/2011 :  1:01:34 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
I'm with Nicole. I really liked it also.
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windowguy
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United Kingdom
2539 Posts

Posted - 08/22/2011 :  12:30:29 PMPoems by windowguy
Many thanks.
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Alice Mae
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USA
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Posted - 09/12/2013 :  1:46:06 PMPoems by Alice Mae
I can just picture the hose swishing back and forth as the
water rushes out. Nice one!!
God Bless with hugs, Sis Mae
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windowguy
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 09/24/2013 :  4:45:00 PMPoems by windowguy
Many thanks for reading and commenting. So pleased you liked it.
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