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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 08/29/2011 :  05:35:33 AMCaptainNateEvans's Poems
My first vampire poem ………………Hope you like it.

The undead who kill to drink a whole flood
They quench their thirst with human blood
Vulnerable to sunlight
These creatures of the night
Humans are unaware of their existence
But only when they die do they learn of their presence
They're just like any other creature trying to survive
Except they have to kill humans if they want to stay alive.

~"Vampires" By Nate Evans

Edited by - CaptainNateEvans on 07/25/2014 02:28:35 AM

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PerfectlyBroken
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
250 Posts

Posted - 08/29/2011 :  09:50:51 AMPoems by PerfectlyBroken
Great poem!
Vampires are awesome :D
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 08/29/2011 :  11:58:33 AMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Indeed they are. I'm glad yew like it.
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monkeys1234
FFP Poet Master

511 Posts

Posted - 08/29/2011 :  4:40:17 PMPoems by monkeys1234
good job
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 08/29/2011 :  5:26:56 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Really?, Thank yew. :)
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monkeys1234
FFP Poet Master

511 Posts

Posted - 08/29/2011 :  6:40:22 PMPoems by monkeys1234
ya lol
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G.Y.C.
FFP Poet Laureate

Philippines
2160 Posts

Posted - 08/30/2011 :  04:43:48 AMPoems by G.Y.C.
great poem nathanevans,
i love it.

thanks for sharing and welcome to the forum:)
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 08/30/2011 :  10:27:13 AMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Thanks :) I was worried it was a bad poem.
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G.Y.C.
FFP Poet Laureate

Philippines
2160 Posts

Posted - 08/30/2011 :  10:37:39 AMPoems by G.Y.C.
don't worry, as long as you made it will all your might then it will be a worth reading poem.

I forgot to add it as one of my favorites..I love vampires actually:))
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 08/30/2011 :  9:56:48 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Nice, Vampyres are awesome.

Edited by - CaptainNateEvans on 09/26/2011 10:08:03 PM
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ezzy-j
FFP Rookie

United Kingdom
32 Posts

Posted - 09/01/2011 :  08:26:06 AMPoems by ezzy-j
Thats awesome and so are vampires! Nice work! :D
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 09/01/2011 :  11:39:12 AMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Thanks. :)
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rawritzlaura16
FFP Poet Master

USA
556 Posts

Posted - 09/06/2011 :  12:06:23 AMPoems by rawritzlaura16
Your first poem :o
One of my favorites :D
I LOVE VAMPIRES!
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 09/06/2011 :  12:14:11 AMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
My first poem on this site not my actual first poem, but if yew wanna see my first poem I can show yew. Thx for liking it.

Vampyres are so awesome!
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rawritzlaura16
FFP Poet Master

USA
556 Posts

Posted - 09/06/2011 :  01:33:57 AMPoems by rawritzlaura16
That's what I meant lol but of course I'd love to see how it all started ;)
I'm actually going to post my first ever tomorrow called "Fall to my knees" I've edited it from the original to make it better
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 09/06/2011 :  3:04:58 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
I'd love to see that, and You'll see my 1st poem tonight, Because the title of the haiku is"Night"
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Stormstar1
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
2607 Posts

Posted - 01/21/2012 :  11:20:06 PMPoems by Stormstar1
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh VAMMPIRES!!! YAY!!! LOVE VAMPIRES!!

i like it.
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 01/23/2012 :  01:00:59 AMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Lol Thanks
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Sydd1515
FFP Newbie

USA
7 Posts

Posted - 01/23/2012 :  01:18:09 AMPoems by Sydd1515
Awesome poem. You should really post more.
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 01/25/2012 :  4:14:28 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
I have two more vampire poems, Plz check them out. :) And thanks for liking it.

Edited by - CaptainNateEvans on 01/25/2012 4:16:51 PM
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kboo75
FFP Freshman

64 Posts

Posted - 01/29/2012 :  10:29:23 PMPoems by kboo75
this is an outstanding poem :)
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 01/29/2012 :  10:46:08 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Wow, thanks. :)
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lyrica28
FFP Poet Master

USA
952 Posts

Posted - 02/09/2012 :  09:29:02 AMPoems by lyrica28
love it... ^-^
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 02/09/2012 :  3:24:14 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Thanks.
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WhatYouNeverKnew
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1076 Posts

Posted - 03/06/2012 :  9:49:25 PMPoems by WhatYouNeverKnew
I am obsessed with vampires, I wish I was one....
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 03/07/2012 :  3:51:07 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Awh, then I'd let you drink my blood. :)
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Miss_Attitude
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
101 Posts

Posted - 03/25/2012 :  8:48:09 PMPoems by Miss_Attitude
I love this poem. Even if I am not a big fan of vamps but they interesting to learn about. Good Job!
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 03/25/2012 :  9:17:23 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Awh, Thank you.
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Nicole The Troll
FFP Freshman

90 Posts

Posted - 03/27/2012 :  2:37:49 PMPoems by Nicole The Troll
wow great poem i love reading poetry and this is one of the better ones I've read keep writing
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 03/28/2012 :  3:14:18 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Thanks. that means alot.
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mrafs
FFP Poet Laureate

Philippines
2608 Posts

Posted - 04/03/2012 :  7:33:29 PMPoems by mrafs
This is what I like
Nice job, dude ;D
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 04/04/2012 :  10:33:49 AMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Thanks. :) glad you like it.
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WhatYouNeverKnew
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1076 Posts

Posted - 10/14/2012 :  10:44:08 PMPoems by WhatYouNeverKnew
Nathan, I would gladly drink your blood. Any minute spent with you is a minute longer I want to be with you
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 10/19/2012 :  7:21:11 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
I bet, my blood is quite delicious. thanks.

The rating doesen't fill me with much confidence that this is good. 3.5. :(

Edited by - CaptainNateEvans on 01/02/2013 7:46:34 PM
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Welcome
FFP Veteran Poet

South Africa
460 Posts

Posted - 01/04/2013 :  07:59:22 AMPoems by Welcome
Good poem NathanEvans...well writen, 10
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 01/05/2013 :  2:11:26 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Thanks
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ChaosIsKey
FFP Freshman

USA
52 Posts

Posted - 02/08/2013 :  12:24:08 PMPoems by ChaosIsKey
Awesome! Its less of a lore based thing, and seems to be closer to a Irish kinda folky tale thing.

Altogether good work!
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 02/08/2013 :  3:01:49 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Thanks alot, I appreciate comments like that
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ChaosIsKey
FFP Freshman

USA
52 Posts

Posted - 02/08/2013 :  3:59:46 PMPoems by ChaosIsKey
Call them like I see them :)

Least you know I'll never lie :-P
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 02/09/2013 :  11:49:18 AMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Thanks Alot though, I like your poems BTW, They're Decent. If want more Vampire poems, Read, Vampire Love, and Blood Love.
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ChaosIsKey
FFP Freshman

USA
52 Posts

Posted - 02/09/2013 :  2:08:52 PMPoems by ChaosIsKey
Omg! Decent is almost as good as great! Lol
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 02/09/2013 :  7:37:02 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
Well I personally think some of your poems are fantastic.
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ChaosIsKey
FFP Freshman

USA
52 Posts

Posted - 02/09/2013 :  8:10:44 PMPoems by ChaosIsKey
Oh man, you make me laugh. You said 'Some' xD. Just tell me which one you weren't satisfied with, it'll help me tons!
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 02/09/2013 :  9:19:14 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
I haven't read them all, That's why I said "SOME"
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ChaosIsKey
FFP Freshman

USA
52 Posts

Posted - 02/09/2013 :  10:27:42 PMPoems by ChaosIsKey
Lol! Well I only have 4 (or 3, idk) so go read them!
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CaptainNateEvans
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1607 Posts

Posted - 02/09/2013 :  11:56:14 PMPoems by CaptainNateEvans
As you wish milady. :3
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