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Ronald Doe
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USA
1574 Posts

Posted - 04/16/2009 :  10:01:02 AM  Show Profile  Visit Ronald Doe's Homepage Send Ronald Doe a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Fellow poets, this topic section has been on for over a week now and there have been no posts. I know I sometimes have a tendency to read the first page of each individual topics. If anybody has anything in the archives I will be happy to read, review and comment on them. Thank you all for sharing your collective talents. Ronnie

Ronnie Doe

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rickwcolorado
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USA
123 Posts

Posted - 04/30/2009 :  8:54:05 PM  Show Profile  Send rickwcolorado an AOL message Send rickwcolorado a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ronnie, I have a poem called "Love and Memories". I am interested in your review.
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spreadpoems
Administrator

USA
292 Posts

Posted - 05/01/2009 :  2:52:46 PM  Show Profile Send spreadpoems a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Here is the poem:
http://forums.familyfriendpoems.com/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=2527
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Caitlin6363
New Member

USA
32 Posts

Posted - 05/05/2009 :  3:05:13 PM  Show Profile  Visit Caitlin6363's Homepage Send Caitlin6363 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Can you please review my poem titled "Can't Get Away"? Thank you :]
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Ronald Doe
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USA
1574 Posts

Posted - 05/05/2009 :  7:53:09 PM  Show Profile  Visit Ronald Doe's Homepage Send Ronald Doe a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Caitlin, I posted a review on te poem on the topic page. Ronnie

Ronnie Doe

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Margo
Junior Member

USA
75 Posts

Posted - 05/10/2009 :  6:36:17 PM  Show Profile Send Margo a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ronald I have two poems that I would appreciate if you can give feeddback. "hidden Image" and "your Rainbow hqas appeared. Thanks
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Miss_Attitude
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USA
14 Posts

Posted - 05/13/2009 :  5:17:02 PM  Show Profile  Visit Miss_Attitude's Homepage  Send Miss_Attitude an AOL message Send Miss_Attitude a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Ronnie, can u review my poem "Miguel". PLEAZZZZZZEEEEEE

*lexi bunnie* all day every day
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Ronald Doe
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USA
1574 Posts

Posted - 05/15/2009 :  02:27:02 AM  Show Profile  Visit Ronald Doe's Homepage Send Ronald Doe a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Margo, this is a very beautiful tribute to your Grandfather. He was lucky to have such a wonderful Granfdaughter.

Ronnie Doe

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xdevilgirl621x
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USA
50 Posts

Posted - 07/22/2009 :  1:04:49 PM  Show Profile  Visit xdevilgirl621x's Homepage  Send xdevilgirl621x an AOL message Send xdevilgirl621x a Private Message  Reply with Quote
ronnie, can you review my poem do you know me and my poem who are you? plezze
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Ronald Doe
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USA
1574 Posts

Posted - 07/22/2009 :  6:32:53 PM  Show Profile  Visit Ronald Doe's Homepage Send Ronald Doe a Private Message  Reply with Quote
xdevil, i commented on each poem in their respective topic sections.

Ronnie Doe

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G.Y.C.
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Philippines
591 Posts

Posted - 08/02/2009 :  01:11:53 AM  Show Profile  Send G.Y.C. a Yahoo! Message Send G.Y.C. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
ammm ronnie can u comment on this poem pls?it's on the sad poetry section tittled "Hurt", this is the link of it...http://forums.familyfriendpoems.com/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=3478 ....tnx:)

~YANA~

-If you love some1, u better prove it, 'coz if u don't they might not believe it.
For love is not a noun to be defined but a verb to be acted upon.-
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Ronald Doe
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USA
1574 Posts

Posted - 08/03/2009 :  9:07:29 PM  Show Profile  Visit Ronald Doe's Homepage Send Ronald Doe a Private Message  Reply with Quote
G.Y.C., I commented on this poem in the sad section topic. A great job.

Ronnie Doe

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G.Y.C.
Advanced Member

Philippines
591 Posts

Posted - 08/10/2009 :  09:30:57 AM  Show Profile  Send G.Y.C. a Yahoo! Message Send G.Y.C. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
am,
ronnie I need another comment:)....
it's on the poetry about friend section tittled "In Love In My Bestfriend"
this is the link>>>>http://forums.familyfriendpoems.com/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=3737
Thank you:)

~YANA~

-If you love some1, u better prove it, 'coz if u don't they might not believe it.
For love is not a noun to be defined but a verb to be acted upon.-
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G.Y.C.
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Philippines
591 Posts

Posted - 09/10/2009 :  11:44:19 AM  Show Profile  Send G.Y.C. a Yahoo! Message Send G.Y.C. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
ronnie need another review,
it's on love poetry section tittled happiest moment,
and the other one is in the agony of love-love hurts section tittled the right decision....

thankz!:)

~YANA~

-If you love some1, u better prove it, 'coz if u don't they might not believe it.
For love is not a noun to be defined but a verb to be acted upon.-
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PBPrettyPinkPunk
Average Member

USA
247 Posts

Posted - 09/12/2009 :  4:57:21 PM  Show Profile  Visit PBPrettyPinkPunk's Homepage  Send PBPrettyPinkPunk an AOL message  Send PBPrettyPinkPunk a Yahoo! Message Send PBPrettyPinkPunk a Private Message  Reply with Quote
ronnie please review this.
its a sad poem thats too true.
about a girl whose abused whose parents walked out and no ones there.
http://forums.familyfriendpoems.com/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=4179

thank you!
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G.Y.C.
Advanced Member

Philippines
591 Posts

Posted - 09/27/2009 :  09:15:06 AM  Show Profile  Send G.Y.C. a Yahoo! Message Send G.Y.C. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
ammm sorry for bothering you a lot by asking a review,

amm need another one is it okay?

it's on the agony of love-love hurts section tittled "From A Distance"

thanks in advance:)

~YANA~

-If you love some1, u better prove it, 'coz if u don't they might not believe it.
For love is not a noun to be defined but a verb to be acted upon.-
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Ronald Doe
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USA
1574 Posts

Posted - 09/28/2009 :  11:04:39 AM  Show Profile  Visit Ronald Doe's Homepage Send Ronald Doe a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Yana, I will reume reading and commenting on as many poems as possible tonight thru Friday. I promise your's will be at the top of the list. keep writing Ronnie

Ronnie Doe

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Zwolinski
New Member

USA
21 Posts

Posted - 10/26/2009 :  4:04:05 PM  Show Profile  Send Zwolinski an AOL message Send Zwolinski a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hey Ronald I'm new to showing people my work and I would LOVE to have you read/review my work.
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ls09
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39 Posts

Posted - 10/27/2009 :  5:10:02 PM  Show Profile Send ls09 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
i'm in the same situation as Zwolinski.

~Lindsey
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ls09
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39 Posts

Posted - 10/27/2009 :  5:33:52 PM  Show Profile Send ls09 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
please review my poems- they are all under teen poets- poetry for teens

~Lindsey
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