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WHO'll BE THE JUDGE?..a poem for Somewhat ADULT children..and little kids!!

 
 
 
 WHO'll BE THE JUDGE?..a poem for Somewhat ADULT children..and little kids!!
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 12/25/2011 :  11:56:34 PMrefinnej's Poems
We can all learn a lesson from little old JACK.
He will EXPLAIN..Please enjoy! Read on..

Jack is just fine..
but he has no friends.
Should he be the one
to go make ..amends?

He has learned to be patient.
..and uses his brain.
..but everyone thinks
..that he's a little insane.

He stands alone..
with convictions so deep.
He wonders "Why me?"
..and begins to weep.

That's when Mary..
..and a beautiful Woman
touched his hand.
Jack raised up
from his seat..
and took a stand!

He allows them to speak, first.
..and when they are through.
He tells them what he thinks
they all should do..

He says, "Play more attention to yourselves.
We all have some problems
..left on our shelves.
Try not to hate me..
BUT.. I really can't see..
Your lights tight..deep inside..
for you..must free.


Your all so stubborn..
and I know you won't budge.

..but I won't be the one..
that will be Your judge."



Edited by - refinnej on 08/15/2013 07:39:29 AM

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Stormstar1
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
2607 Posts

Posted - 12/27/2011 :  7:01:34 PMPoems by Stormstar1
When you say adult children you mean Stevie right? (I named my stuffed monkey after him. I can hardly tell them apart at times. lol.)

Anyways... I love how you made the lettering small at the beginning and large at the end. Very creative and unique (in a good way).
*another standing ovation* I LOVE IT!!!!!!! TEN!!!!!!
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 12/27/2011 :  7:13:30 PMPoems by refinnej
Jazz - Thanks sweetie?
You mean Brother Stevie?
AKA Trumpetman..maybe..why do you ask?
(Only kidding Bro!!)Adult children I think
I'm referring to the "ones who spoke first..
you know before Jack put them all in their
@$#ing place. Oops! Sorry I mean..well you know..lol!!!!
Love ya..
Jennifer
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Sarah123
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1395 Posts

Posted - 12/27/2011 :  7:32:19 PMPoems by Sarah123
Awesome poem with a awesome meaning. Like Jasmine said the small lettering to the big lettering was pretty cool.
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Stormstar1
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
2607 Posts

Posted - 12/27/2011 :  9:23:07 PMPoems by Stormstar1
thats okay. my one friend that doesn't cuss (the persoN who commented above me) calls me a potty mouth. i don't mind cussing. very funny. sorry about the two comment thing, dial-up interneet *cusses out computer*

Oops, there goes my mouth...

Love you bunches and God Bless,


Jazz
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 12/27/2011 :  9:37:27 PMPoems by refinnej
Sarah - Thanks sweetie!
I'm so glad you enjoy!
Take Care. God Bless.
-Jennifer
=refinnej
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 12/27/2011 :  9:40:51 PMPoems by refinnej
Jazz - Yes..I do. I have a mouth like a truck driver.
..but there are worse things that you can be!
Like a &%$@ing mean person! lol!!..not you..I'm just saying!
I hate down right mean people..what is wrong with a couple cuss words?
I mean &%$@$ing come on! hehe!!!
Loves ya,
~JENXO

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Sarah123
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1395 Posts

Posted - 12/28/2011 :  2:10:25 PMPoems by Sarah123
You're welcome! Jen Jasmine you are not around me a lot, sometimes I do slip. But mostly I used Fudgeing Mc Fudgers as my cuss word lol.
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 12/28/2011 :  2:17:31 PMPoems by refinnej
Sarah - I do the same thing..How funny!
~Jen
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Sarah123
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1395 Posts

Posted - 12/28/2011 :  3:29:26 PMPoems by Sarah123
Yes very! I notice a lot of people use fudge for F**k so I improved it for me. It more fun to say then other words any way.
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 12/28/2011 :  7:21:58 PMPoems by refinnej
Sarah - I agree. There are so many different word to use.
I'll try a little harder not to say any cuss words if you do?
Your really cute ans sweet. Take Care..honey.
~Jen
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Terry c Lewis
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
12853 Posts

Posted - 12/28/2011 :  7:39:11 PMPoems by Terry c Lewis
Wow, we can all take a look in the mirror, and find out who we can help
this day in any way we possibly can. One day we will be asked who did you help,
care for in my name. We know who the final judge will be: Jesus is He.

Sis Terry
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Sarah123
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1395 Posts

Posted - 12/28/2011 :  8:54:48 PMPoems by Sarah123
I won't use any cuss words, promise! Thank you, you are very sweet too.
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magicman
FFP Poet Laureate

Australia
19138 Posts

Posted - 12/29/2011 :  02:53:47 AMPoems by magicman
Great poem Jen!
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Stormstar1
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
2607 Posts

Posted - 12/31/2011 :  7:22:20 PMPoems by Stormstar1
I like to say puck but it still gets me in trouble. so now I say poop, poopy or poopsicle. lol.

(some of my friends make fun of me for that though. But I used to cuss in every sentence. I do cuss a lot still, but not NEARLY as much as before.)

Anywho...

@$%# this stupid computerr!!! GRRR!!! DIE COMPUTER, DIE!! sorry, my computer is being stupid. lol.

love you.

~Jazz
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21316 Posts

Posted - 01/03/2012 :  7:48:57 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Jen, when it comes to poetry you are definitely a jack of all trades. What a powerful, powerful message you have sent in this poem. Great job.
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PrinceCharles
FFP Moderator

United Kingdom
19974 Posts

Posted - 01/09/2012 :  2:02:16 PMPoems by PrinceCharles
Powerful poem and message god bless.x
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1992patricia
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
4224 Posts

Posted - 02/17/2012 :  12:16:08 AMPoems by 1992patricia
Very good poem. I like this.
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 02/17/2012 :  5:14:33 PMPoems by refinnej
John - Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoy poem.
Take Care. God bless.
-Jennifer
=refinnej
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 02/17/2012 :  10:39:01 PMPoems by refinnej
begirl001 - Thanks so much!
Take Care. God Bless.
-Jennifer
=refinnej
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Alice Mae
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
14608 Posts

Posted - 02/22/2012 :  6:32:53 PMPoems by Alice Mae
Hay! I like that cute poem. Very well done. A big 10 for you my angel. Hugs and God Bless, sis Mae
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 02/22/2012 :  10:34:30 PMPoems by refinnej
Alice - Thanks so much, Sis!
I'm glad you enjoyed my poem,
and I'm glad to hear from you.
Hope all is well. Take Care.
God Bless.
-Jennifer
=refinnej
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luckilye
FFP Poet Laureate

United Kingdom
1403 Posts

Posted - 05/07/2012 :  12:56:16 PMPoems by luckilye
Excelent poem with a valid message we would all do well to learn :)
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 06/16/2012 :  6:56:05 PMPoems by refinnej
Gary - Thanks so much for commenting!
I really appreciate..and glad you enjoy poem.
Take Care. God Bless.
-Jennifer
-refinnej
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Chris Jackson
FFP Veteran Poet

New Zealand
334 Posts

Posted - 01/05/2013 :  07:00:31 AMPoems by Chris Jackson
It says it for children...im thirteen and idk wat it means
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 01/05/2013 :  08:29:27 AMPoems by refinnej
Laqualum - I thought you are 15.
That's what your profile says?
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Chris Jackson
FFP Veteran Poet

New Zealand
334 Posts

Posted - 01/05/2013 :  08:33:12 AMPoems by Chris Jackson
You have to be fifteen to join......dont report me this poetry site rox
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magicman
FFP Poet Laureate

Australia
19138 Posts

Posted - 08/15/2013 :  07:31:01 AMPoems by magicman
Well done Jen!
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5010 Posts

Posted - 08/28/2013 :  08:34:13 AMPoems by refinnej
Bill - Thank you much!
I appreciate the comment.
Take care. God Bless.
-Jennifer
=refinnej
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