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R.I.P Dad

 
 
 
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michelleashelford
FFP Newbie

United Kingdom
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Posted - 03/14/2012 :  6:05:00 PMmichelleashelford's Poems
This was dedicated to my dad who lost his battle to prostate cancer. I did this one the day after my dad died, after nursing him for 6 weeks at home god rest his soul. xxx

The angels came and took you dad far up in the sky,
you were only 63 and far to young to die,
i hope now your up above your not in any pain,
some day in the future we will meet again.

you were so strong and really brave right until the end,
a broken heart can ease with time but will never mend,
im so glad we got some time to say the things we did,
was nice to reminisce about the past when i was a kid,

They say memories are golden well maybe that is true,
I never wanted memories, I only wanted you.
A million times I needed you, a million times I cried.
If love alone could have saved you you never would have died.

In life I loved you dearly, In death I love you still.
In my heart you hold a place no one could ever fill.
If tears could build a stairway and heartache make a lane,
I'd walk the path to heaven and bring you back again.

im sending you this poem dad and its filled with lots of love,
untill we meet again il send you kisses up above.
R.I.P DAD LOVE YOU ALWAYS

Edited by - michelleashelford on 03/15/2012 6:26:01 PM

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coldblud101
FFP Freshman

USA
58 Posts

Posted - 03/14/2012 :  10:19:36 PMPoems by coldblud101
really good poem and im sorry about your dad. keep up the poetry. and dont stop if your friends make fun of you
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Caboverdish
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1024 Posts

Posted - 03/14/2012 :  11:14:45 PMPoems by Caboverdish
Really well written.
And welcome to the site.
Keep writing you are good at it.
And it may be therapeutic.
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Tia Mihr
FFP Poet Laureate

2918 Posts

Posted - 03/15/2012 :  2:43:49 PMPoems by Tia Mihr
Star poem. Express everything I feel for my dad.
I'm sorry for your loss but hope writing this has helped.
Carry on writing, you are a natural.
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Tia Mihr
FFP Poet Laureate

2918 Posts

Posted - 03/15/2012 :  2:45:54 PMPoems by Tia Mihr
sorry by the way gave u a 10.
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PrinceCharles
FFP Moderator

United Kingdom
19025 Posts

Posted - 03/15/2012 :  3:18:05 PMPoems by PrinceCharles
Life can be so hard,sadly grief is the price we have to pay for love, I lost my wife 18 months ago age 63,so i know how you feel,god bless.
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michelleashelford
FFP Newbie

United Kingdom
4 Posts

Posted - 03/15/2012 :  6:18:04 PMPoems by michelleashelford
Thanks guys i find it therapeutic to write poems as im not so good at sharing my grief. Will write some more soon.
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qut110
FFP Veteran Poet

Ireland
107 Posts

Posted - 03/18/2012 :  6:40:07 PMPoems by qut110
Very good poem and I'm so sorry about your dad.
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