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Losing yourself

 
 
 
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ADayToRemember
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Posted - 05/24/2012 :  4:46:00 PMADayToRemember's Poems
I'm somewhere
That's darker than a starless night
Created by all the pain I cannot bear
Writhes bitter fear and pure sorrow
Which I would not describe

I lost myself
Deep within the fathomless depths
My lonely soul drifts aimlessly
Lost between the facades and falsifies
I beg for my escape
But I am not granted this wish

The pressure bearing down on me
Is impossible to describe
And after so much contained anger
With tears I have not dropped
Somewhere along the way I've lost who I am
In a place that I've all but forgot

Edited by - ADayToRemember on 05/28/2012 3:14:56 PM

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jnash1
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
257 Posts

Posted - 05/25/2012 :  12:20:30 AMPoems by jnash1
I really like this poem. It's very dark and it describes how my life once was. Very good use of descriptions! I loved it. Do you mind checking out some of my poems? Please and thank you!

~ Jasmine N.
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fallen
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
216 Posts

Posted - 05/28/2012 :  01:35:15 AMPoems by fallen
It reminds me of how I am now and some what how I feel
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G.Y.C.
FFP Poet Laureate

Philippines
2160 Posts

Posted - 05/28/2012 :  10:28:10 AMPoems by G.Y.C.
Sometimes I feel like this..like I lost not only a part of me but also
the entire 'ME'. But maybe one day, I'll find who I am again.



thanks for sharing,
great poem.
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phaith
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
286 Posts

Posted - 05/28/2012 :  6:17:54 PMPoems by phaith
I love this poem. It reminds me of myself at a point in my life when I strayed from my values and felt lost and completely unsafe. I remember the ride back to a more secure self, I felt like I was chasing after a glimmer of hope that could disappear at any moment. It felt like a darkness that was all consuming and hopeless. Great poem, you describe your thoughts very well. 10
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dreamlessxxx
FFP Veteran Poet

United Kingdom
123 Posts

Posted - 05/29/2012 :  3:34:52 PMPoems by dreamlessxxx
I love this poem, and agree with everything phaith writes, except I am still on that journey and your poem is not such a distant memory. Great poem.
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