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I Want to Make Sweet Love to You

 
 
 
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Ronnie Doe
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USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  08:35:30 AMRonnie Doe's Poems
I wrote this as a song a long time ago. I took out the chorus and added a few more verses.

I Want to Make Sweet Love to You

I want to tempt the hands of fate
Take you out on a lovely date
Act like a perfect gentleman
Be as romantic as I can

I want to show up with flowers
Walk with you in April showers
Hold your hand and open the door
For the woman I do adore

I want to take you out to eat
Pull out your chair until you seat
In the fanciest restaurant
Tell you to order what you want

I want to sit by candlelight
With the mood and atmosphere right
Gazing into your lovely eyes
Sing love songs and sweet lullabies

I want to turn on all my charms
Hold you in my tender arms
As I am slow dancing with you
Softly whisper "You’re beautiful”

I want to count the stars above
With the woman I truly love
After that walk you to your door
So you can feel safe and secure

I want to be invited in
Gaze in loving eyes once again
As I watch them sparkle and shine
Open up a bottle of wine

I want to hope our next slow dance
Will lead to a night of romance
As we are dancing cheek to cheek
Feel your heart beat and knees go weak

I want to catch you as you fall
Let you know you’re a living doll
Make your body feel like a flame
When I softly whisper your name

I want to taste your honey lips
Feel the passion behind your kiss
Smell the aroma of perfume
As you lead me to your bedroom

I want to lay down by the side
Of my lover and future bride
On this wondrous and lovely night
Make love to you with all my might

I want to kiss your pretty head
As I am lying in your bed
Prove to you that my love is true
By telling you you’re beautiful

I want to give you all my love
Make you sparkle like stars above
Feel Heavenly and so divine
As you lie in these arms of mine

I want your heart to feel a flame
When I softly whisper your name
If it’s the last thing that I do
I want to make sweet love to you



Edited by - Ronnie Doe on 04/03/2013 9:30:01 PM

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Evangeline
FFP Moderator

USA
18774 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  09:14:31 AMPoems by Evangeline
Ronnie, I think if you read her this poem her knees will definitely go weak. I know mine did. Whew! Quite the romantic aren't you? LOL
Seriously, great job on this. :)

Had to come back and add to favorites.

Edited by - Evangeline on 07/08/2012 10:46:39 AM
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
4958 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  09:33:20 AMPoems by refinnej
Ronnie - Mine too! So sweet and loving..
just like you! Sweet nothings could always
end up to be something! Great write!
@}------> Excellent!!
Take CARE. God Bless.
-Jennifer
=refinnej

Edited by - refinnej on 07/08/2012 09:33:46 AM
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  10:48:14 AMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Evangeline, thanks for appreciating it twice and adding it to your favorites. I actually changed it a little since the first time you read it.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  10:49:00 AMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Jennifer, thanks a lot for reading and commenting. Sweet nothings can be sweet somethings.
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magicman
FFP Poet Laureate

Australia
18570 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  10:56:24 AMPoems by magicman
A real charmer. Great romatic poem. Well done
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Evangeline
FFP Moderator

USA
18774 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  10:56:27 AMPoems by Evangeline
Ronnie, yes...I see the change. Love it!
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belladonna cadaver
FFP Poet Laureate

Saint Lucia
1211 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  11:52:53 AMPoems by belladonna cadaver
i love this
i second vangie
this is beautiful
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Tia Mihr
FFP Poet Laureate

2918 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  4:40:05 PMPoems by Tia Mihr
Such a beautiful romantic poem. Pure excellence from a true romantic.
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irina
FFP Poet Laureate

United Kingdom
4612 Posts

Posted - 07/08/2012 :  6:20:35 PMPoems by irina
Hey ronnie, you know how to charm a woman!
That's a great lovely poem! well done
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PrinceCharles
FFP Moderator

United Kingdom
19364 Posts

Posted - 07/09/2012 :  06:56:27 AMPoems by PrinceCharles
Ronnie either your got it or you ain't,you are the romantic poem master,you have the women going weak at the knees, and some of the men I bet,still lets not go there lol.
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Terry c Lewis
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
12821 Posts

Posted - 07/09/2012 :  07:01:50 AMPoems by Terry c Lewis
Wow such romance reminds me of The book in the bible, Song of Solomon.
This is really a heart burning write with so much passion.
Be blessed,

Sis Terry
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/10/2012 :  3:26:31 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Bill, thank you very much.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/10/2012 :  3:27:04 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
V, I am glad you like the changes. Thanks for coming back to it again.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/10/2012 :  3:27:43 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Bella, as always thanks a lot for reading and writing.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/10/2012 :  3:29:09 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Irina, Fried Green Tomatoes had the Bee Charmer. The forum has The Lady Charmer. lol. Thanks for commenting.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/10/2012 :  3:30:11 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
John, thanks a lot. Hopefully I don't have any men knocking on my door. lol
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/10/2012 :  3:31:25 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Terry, thanks so much for readin, enjoying and commenting. Much appreciated. God bless, Ronnie
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Alice Mae
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
14340 Posts

Posted - 07/10/2012 :  6:52:58 PMPoems by Alice Mae
This is absolutely beautiful, Ronnie. A real love poem from a real Romeo.
Well done and written. Hugs and god Bless, Sis Mae
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Kristy kat2
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
166 Posts

Posted - 07/11/2012 :  8:32:36 PMPoems by Kristy kat2
Such a great poem(:
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irina
FFP Poet Laureate

United Kingdom
4612 Posts

Posted - 07/11/2012 :  8:38:25 PMPoems by irina
Thanks ronnie.
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mrafs
FFP Poet Laureate

Philippines
2608 Posts

Posted - 07/12/2012 :  8:11:41 PMPoems by mrafs
I've been gone for weeks and coolest write so far
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/15/2012 :  2:55:30 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Alice, thanks a lot. Romeo, Ronnie Doe they sound the same.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/15/2012 :  2:56:12 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Kristy, thank you very much for reading and commenting.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/15/2012 :  2:56:51 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Irina, you're welcome
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/15/2012 :  2:57:25 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Mark, welcome back. That's a nice compliment to make.
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Pleasant_Sorrow
FFP Poet Master

909 Posts

Posted - 07/17/2012 :  5:59:39 PMPoems by Pleasant_Sorrow
That was amazing
such a lovely and such a beautiful poem ..
amazingly written :)
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/17/2012 :  6:09:58 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Sweet Saro, thank you very much. I am happy you enjoyed it so much.
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xinnocencex
FFP Poet Master

USA
872 Posts

Posted - 07/18/2012 :  8:08:10 PMPoems by xinnocencex
So sweet wish my boyfriend was like that:)
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1992patricia
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
4224 Posts

Posted - 07/18/2012 :  11:16:55 PMPoems by 1992patricia
Very good poem and amazing picture. Great job.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/28/2012 :  4:01:04 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
x, thank you. I hope your boyfriend starts doing a better job being sweet to you.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 07/28/2012 :  4:01:38 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Patricia, thank you very much as always.
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Shadowlight76
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
202 Posts

Posted - 07/30/2012 :  03:52:17 AMPoems by Shadowlight76
WOW, I am weak at the knees just reading this!
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 08/01/2012 :  1:49:03 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Chantal, it is very nice to hear from you. I hope all is well. Thanks for reading and commenting on this. God bless, Ronnie
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robert
FFP Poet Master

Philippines
665 Posts

Posted - 08/02/2012 :  08:47:44 AMPoems by robert
WOW.. I'll try this one the next time i had a date.

Very well written Master Poet Ronald Doe. I like the romance and the sweetness of it as it flows on every words... Very nice one... I give this 100
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irina
FFP Poet Laureate

United Kingdom
4612 Posts

Posted - 08/09/2012 :  9:08:16 PMPoems by irina
Ronnie,i forgot to tell you! some words here in your poem are from the songs i used to and listen still, constantly!
and i have been on a site called "take me out too!
i think you forgot Lady Gaga!The edge of glory!!!
Great poem! Well, i know it's just a coincidence!
i thought to share this with you,that's it!
blessings

Edited by - irina on 08/10/2012 5:41:21 PM
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xchefie
FFP Poet Laureate

1031 Posts

Posted - 08/10/2012 :  11:09:19 AMPoems by xchefie
Where's the sick bucket???? Great poem as usual Ronnie
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 08/11/2012 :  4:03:05 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Go for it Robert. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 08/11/2012 :  4:05:55 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Irina, my kids often ask me if I know any songs from this century. Sadly Pink's "Don't Leave Me" is one of the few. I've heard of Lady Gaga but don't know any of her songs. At least I don't think I do. Is "The Edge of Glory" a song or album of hers? f it is I will download it and check it out. Thanks for coming back to this. God bless, Ronnie
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 08/11/2012 :  4:08:56 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Frank, thank you very much. It is great to hear from you.
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irina
FFP Poet Laureate

United Kingdom
4612 Posts

Posted - 08/11/2012 :  7:04:07 PMPoems by irina
Ronnie, iam sorry,iam a bit confused.
i do reckon some words in the songs i always listen!
Somehting is rooten in Danmark!
I thought you were someone else! LoL
I really apologize!!! it was something about
a website called "take me out".i have been there!
But is nothing to do with you! Sorry,it's me trying to
sort out some things that took place in my past!
but i have to move on now...

Edited by - irina on 08/11/2012 7:08:59 PM
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 08/11/2012 :  7:21:37 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Irina, it's all good. I've heard Lady Gaga is fantastic. Sadly, I'm stuck in the past and don't think there will ever be an era of music as the one I grew up in. May God bless you and help you sort out your past. Ronnie

Edited by - Ronnie Doe on 08/25/2012 02:03:21 AM
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angel_in_disguise1325
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
273 Posts

Posted - 12/22/2012 :  01:34:11 AMPoems by angel_in_disguise1325
Terrific Write Ron!!! Love this one!!!
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a_broken_heart55
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
139 Posts

Posted - 01/04/2013 :  04:15:52 AMPoems by a_broken_heart55
Oh....My....Gosh!!!

Do the words "Take my breath away" sound familiar???

Absolutely Beautiful!!!

**10**
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 01/11/2013 :  7:40:28 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Christine, thanks a lot for reading and commenting
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 01/11/2013 :  7:41:12 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
A, that is a nice comment to make. Thank you
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Dreamer
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
181 Posts

Posted - 04/07/2013 :  11:02:35 AMPoems by Dreamer
Beautiful poem, so sentimental, and passionate. 10 10 10 :) Great job, keep on writing
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 05/22/2013 :  12:07:39 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Linda, thanks a lot for reading and responding. Welcome to the forum. Look forward to reading your work. God bless, Ronnie
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blaquemask
FFP Poet Laureate

United Kingdom
1185 Posts

Posted - 07/25/2013 :  2:29:29 PMPoems by blaquemask
Oh my
I f!cking love this poem
you smash it!
I hope one day I'll have someone who would treat me this way wow
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Hugozhor
FFP Veteran Poet

Czech Republic
386 Posts

Posted - 07/25/2013 :  3:35:51 PMPoems by Hugozhor
Wow,

really sweet and beatiful. I think every woman would melt like a snow after hearing this
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dgreen
FFP Veteran Poet

United Kingdom
251 Posts

Posted - 10/11/2013 :  02:06:58 AMPoems by dgreen
Good job you little sex symbol haha
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