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skillgamer5
FFP Newbie

USA
4 Posts

Posted - 09/10/2009 :  03:53:53 AMskillgamer5's Poems
You were my idol, now you're gone.
You should be here now, this is wrong.

I miss you more every day;
as i smoke these camel straights away.
I light em up, just like you;
cause suicide is my thing to.

I thought about you more today,
than I did on Saturday...

...Saturday was yesterday,
this pain will never go away

Edited by - skillgamer5 on 11/25/2009 3:57:28 PM

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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21316 Posts

Posted - 10/06/2009 :  9:58:46 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Skill, obviously a very tough poem to write. Very well expressed. Short and to the point. I am sorry for your loss.
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pongener
FFP Veteran Poet

India
275 Posts

Posted - 10/09/2009 :  12:03:30 AMPoems by pongener
WOW!!!! thats the best amature poem I have ever read!!!!!! really touching... Love to u!
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PrincessPeach
FFP Freshman

USA
67 Posts

Posted - 10/19/2009 :  1:19:02 PMPoems by PrincessPeach
Wow!!! great poem
still about ur dad well he's there for u
pray for him that god will see ur dad.
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glennmillington
FFP Newbie

United Kingdom
2 Posts

Posted - 11/07/2009 :  09:11:52 AMPoems by glennmillington
Very good effort
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twildone12
FFP Poet Master

USA
562 Posts

Posted - 11/07/2009 :  9:20:00 PMPoems by twildone12
WOW AMAZING!!! sorry for your loss.. much love to you hun
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brokengirl299
FFP Rookie

USA
31 Posts

Posted - 11/09/2009 :  11:50:43 AMPoems by brokengirl299
That was amazing. really good poem. Your dad will forever be with you in your heart as long as you want him there. Here something that helped my sister deal with a 4 year olds death in the family. Listen to the song "holes in the floor of Heaven" its a country song it helps her remeber that KAtelynn can still see her and so can your dad. God bless and take care....
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rickwcolorado
FFP Veteran Poet

USA
172 Posts

Posted - 11/11/2009 :  10:52:59 AMPoems by rickwcolorado
Skill. I am so sorry for you loss. No words of wisdom here, just the acknowledgement that your pain is a hard thing to overcome. Your poem is very good and I understand the pain does not go away even as we move forward to the next day.
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Liz Koschitzke
FFP Newbie

Australia
6 Posts

Posted - 11/16/2009 :  7:18:55 PMPoems by Liz Koschitzke
bit depressing
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sweetness
FFP Veteran Poet

154 Posts

Posted - 11/25/2009 :  5:00:50 PMPoems by sweetness
Sad, but very touching. I hope poetry helps you heal as much as possible. Please keep sharing. :)
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cutie
FFP Poet Laureate

2342 Posts

Posted - 01/02/2010 :  12:20:33 PMPoems by cutie
Great poem sweetie! i love it! keep up the good work! I believe in you! you're going to be okay! that i do know!
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refinnej
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
5016 Posts

Posted - 07/03/2011 :  6:56:56 PMPoems by refinnej
James - I am so sorry. I am sure this was difficult to write.
Keep expressing your feeling through poetry..you are very good.
God Bless you James..Take Care.
-Jennifer
=refinnej
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magicman
FFP Poet Laureate

Australia
19208 Posts

Posted - 01/05/2012 :  01:12:53 AMPoems by magicman
Great poem of emotion and sadness. Sorryn for your loss. This poem may help a bit. http://forums.familyfriendpoems.com/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=28591
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