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Zwolinski
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Posted - 11/03/2009 :  4:35:26 PM  Show Profile  Send Zwolinski an AOL message Send Zwolinski a Private Message  Reply with Quote
-When that day came I needed a friend
-Not someone to lie to, sit, play, laugh, just pretend
-I was alone in a cave, nothing to do but sigh
-Sit and watch, waiting for life to kick me as it went by
-Cute girls in class, pretty girls on TV, hot girls in magazines, they seem to be everywhere it seems
-But none for me know matter how hard I try, only perfect girl for me is in my dreams
-So I lay in bed and stare at the wall
-Under the covers was I, little chilly due to it was Fall
-I turn on the TV to see what was on
-No plans at all, watch the screen until it was dawn
-Watching "The Hills" were bitches lied and fought
-My head started pounding as my brain started to rot
-So I rolled out of bed, to the computer chair i went
-My mind telling me, my best years are spent
-i went to 'Google' in search of something
-When the home page came up, my cell began to ring
-It was my girlfriend who answered, annoying voice as she began to bitch and moan
-I has enough of it so I yelled and hung up the phone
-Put my cursor on the address bar and typed what was on my mind, closed my eyes and clicked twice
-What caught my eye was the fight thing that came up, 'Teen-spot' dash 'Teen-Advice'
-So I gave it a try and talked with strangers
-It was pretty entertaining at first, but later got boring
-So I hoped to new rooms, not typing, just touring
-Till I went in this room, and met this girl
-We talked on private chat and she was one of a kind, beautiful shiny golden pearl
-But I figured she must be another online ugly chick
-But seeing that face, for just one second, put my girlfriends to disgrace
-Face of the most pretty angle, but eyes of the fearful devil
-One look from her could make any guy a rebel
-She laughed at my jokes and even said i was cute, how could this be
-i thought she was just being nice, or maybe shes the one
-But I can't be, she's the one's I think of in class for fun
Days Later
-Now shes mine and I've never been the same
-Shes far away but i don't care, sit and wait for her to take my heart to claim
-For it is hers and I'll never forget her voice
-I don't know what becomes of us, as for now I think of those lips in rejoice
-Time won't drag me down
-Distance can not hold me back
-I cannot give her up, shes everything that makes me free
-i love you, My DawnaLee

Ronald Doe
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Posted - 11/09/2009 :  10:52:37 AM  Show Profile  Visit Ronald Doe's Homepage Send Ronald Doe a Private Message  Reply with Quote
A very moving and loving poem to Dawnalee. She should be honored by it.

Ronnie Doe

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keisha_writer
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Posted - 11/10/2009 :  1:47:32 PM  Show Profile  Visit keisha_writer's Homepage Send keisha_writer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
This is an amazing dedication to Dawnalee!! I'm so happy you found a girl just made for you! So sweet and sincere!
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