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jim122182
FFP Rookie

USA
15 Posts

Posted - 11/08/2009 :  06:51:55 AMjim122182's Poems
Someone really likes you and thinks your really cool it makes me really wonder just what it is I should do .

I think I have to tell you , I think that you should know that when I am around you I do not want to go .

I've never wrote a poem so this took me some time , and it was super hard for me to make it rhyme .

I really thought about it and every single time the only thing I thought is I wish that you were mine .

If I was ever so lucky then I could show them just how it is I would treat you , so perfect , not just as your friend .

It was hard for me to write this but only cause I'm shy , knowing you made it easy , I think that I know why.

Its because I really trust you , I've thought this way some time.

Wanted to say it in person but you were on my mind.

If you really want someone that will be so true then think of me write a poem,send one to me too !

Edited by - jim122182 on 11/11/2009 01:56:54 AM

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divot
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
4729 Posts

Posted - 11/08/2009 :  08:02:43 AMPoems by divot
Good job, I think she'll be inpressed you took the time and effort to tell her how you feel.Hope it works out for you.
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jim122182
FFP Rookie

USA
15 Posts

Posted - 11/08/2009 :  10:19:40 AMPoems by jim122182
Thank you !
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twildone12
FFP Poet Master

USA
562 Posts

Posted - 11/08/2009 :  10:41:25 AMPoems by twildone12
REALLY GOOD job, i think once she reads this she will be very thankful and happy because you took the time to tell her how you feel unlike a lot of guys do. So good job and keep up the good work. Good luck with the girl hun
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jim122182
FFP Rookie

USA
15 Posts

Posted - 11/08/2009 :  11:47:27 AMPoems by jim122182
You really think so huh?

Edited by - jim122182 on 11/15/2009 12:17:57 AM
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twildone12
FFP Poet Master

USA
562 Posts

Posted - 11/08/2009 :  11:56:19 AMPoems by twildone12
Yes i do....well hopefully she does give you the chance
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jim122182
FFP Rookie

USA
15 Posts

Posted - 11/08/2009 :  11:57:14 AMPoems by jim122182
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Edited by - jim122182 on 11/15/2009 12:07:10 AM
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twildone12
FFP Poet Master

USA
562 Posts

Posted - 11/08/2009 :  12:20:48 PMPoems by twildone12
Welcome to jim122182 poem Gloria, i really hope you like it!!
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jim122182
FFP Rookie

USA
15 Posts

Posted - 11/13/2009 :  4:28:56 PMPoems by jim122182
UPDATE:



Well people I feel down a lil , she don't want me ... I gave her the chance don't think it mattered

Edited by - jim122182 on 11/15/2009 12:22:00 AM
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jim122182
FFP Rookie

USA
15 Posts

Posted - 11/14/2009 :  11:49:49 PMPoems by jim122182
hey you !

Edited by - jim122182 on 11/15/2009 12:08:50 AM
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twildone12
FFP Poet Master

USA
562 Posts

Posted - 11/14/2009 :  11:51:43 PMPoems by twildone12
hi...haha oh oh ohohoho thats me im twildone12..haha sorry!
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jim122182
FFP Rookie

USA
15 Posts

Posted - 11/14/2009 :  11:53:18 PMPoems by jim122182
quote:
Originally posted by twildone12

hi...haha oh oh ohohoho thats me im twildone12..haha sorry!

and like you said, i am confused...

Edited by - jim122182 on 11/15/2009 4:49:54 PM
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twildone12
FFP Poet Master

USA
562 Posts

Posted - 11/14/2009 :  11:54:20 PMPoems by twildone12
haha what how are you confused...im confused haha o goodness gracious what are we going to do.. haha
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jim122182
FFP Rookie

USA
15 Posts

Posted - 11/14/2009 :  11:55:42 PMPoems by jim122182
quote:
Originally posted by twildone12

haha what how are you confused...im confused haha o goodness gracious what are we going to do.. haha

yes yes of coarse

Edited by - jim122182 on 11/15/2009 12:15:47 AM
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twildone12
FFP Poet Master

USA
562 Posts

Posted - 11/14/2009 :  11:57:26 PMPoems by twildone12
what haha im lost hahha
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 11/19/2009 :  8:05:02 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Keep plugging. A great poem
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