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XxCutthroatatdawnxX
FFP Rookie

24 Posts

Posted - 11/22/2009 :  3:55:34 PMXxCutthroatatdawnxX's Poems
I trust you with my heart
Knowing this is a new start
I tell you that I love you
You reply with I love you too.

I stare after you as you walk away
I smile to keep the tears at bay
I lay and wait
Knowing I have been turned on by fate.

You left me there alone
My heart was coming unsewn
You had my trust
But lost it during your selfish night of lust.

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G.Y.C.
FFP Poet Laureate

Philippines
2160 Posts

Posted - 11/23/2009 :  02:20:37 AMPoems by G.Y.C.
it's so sad it turns out to be that way,
but you should move on and be happy again even it's hard it will be worth it in the end.

i like this poem, well done!:)
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XxCutthroatatdawnxX
FFP Rookie

24 Posts

Posted - 11/23/2009 :  04:17:50 AMPoems by XxCutthroatatdawnxX
Thank you very much G.Y.C.
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AnightmareTOremember
FFP Newbie

USA
0 Posts

Posted - 11/24/2009 :  09:24:38 AMPoems by AnightmareTOremember
v_v
Betrayal is a painful thing.
I know how it feels.
But just remember:
Rise through the pain
Like the sun will rise again.
It's rise and fall
Inspires us all.
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 11/25/2009 :  05:01:36 AMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Another sad example of love them and leave them. Nicely expressed.
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AnightmareTOremember
FFP Newbie

USA
0 Posts

Posted - 12/01/2009 :  09:14:46 AMPoems by AnightmareTOremember
quote:
Originally posted by Ronald Doe

Another sad example of love them and leave them. Nicely expressed.


Indeed.
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allehs_30
FFP Poet Master

Philippines
585 Posts

Posted - 01/26/2011 :  03:17:46 AMPoems by allehs_30
Hi! Welcome to the forum. You're poem was well written despite of the sad message on it. Keep on writing!
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irisheyes
FFP Poet Laureate

3445 Posts

Posted - 01/26/2011 :  09:28:58 AMPoems by irisheyes
You did a good job of keeping the reader surprised at the end. What started out as a love poem ended as a love em and and leave em poem. Good job and you used a creative format to write it.
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xchefie
FFP Poet Laureate

1031 Posts

Posted - 01/26/2011 :  12:09:47 PMPoems by xchefie
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XxCutthroatatdawnxX

It's a cut throat world out there. Take care!!! great write.




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monkeys1234
FFP Poet Master

511 Posts

Posted - 04/06/2011 :  11:05:15 AMPoems by monkeys1234
that is soo true
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