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Because of You

 
 
 
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LilliQuinn
FFP Rookie

Ireland
16 Posts

Posted - 07/28/2013 :  8:31:50 PMLilliQuinn's Poems
I guess this is just like every other heartbroken poem.
He said he loved me, and I loved him too. From my nickname of "birdy" to the lyrics he'd write on me it was supposed to last forever. Isn't it funny how short forever can be?


I don't want to admit it.
But I think I have to.

Because of you
A simple name is no longer a simple name.
Now it is a complicated story
A hurtful memory.

5 f*cking letters
And I get a stab in my chest.

Because of you
3 minute melodies make me drown in sorrows.
All of the lyrics you'd write on my hand are burning my skin
At least it feels that way.

Because of you
My journal has page upon page torn out.
Because my stupid little words of love and admiration mean nothing anymore.
Those poems are trash.
Well,
Actually they are in ashes now.

Because of you
My secrets are no long only my own.
I thought I could I trust you.
But you have no bandages to repair this broken heart.

So basically.
f*ck you.

I'm still hurt and still bruised.
My wings have tears

But your "birdy" has flown away.

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hobber9
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
1114 Posts

Posted - 08/12/2013 :  12:33:19 AMPoems by hobber9
welcome to FFP
this poem is quite moving and sad.
the pain in your words, yet there's a hint of "I will be alright"
keep your chin up..
"Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end"-Semisonic
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LilliQuinn
FFP Rookie

Ireland
16 Posts

Posted - 08/12/2013 :  06:45:30 AMPoems by LilliQuinn
Thank you very much<3 that means a lot to me.:)
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I adore the sun
FFP Poet Master

United Kingdom
526 Posts

Posted - 08/17/2013 :  6:52:02 PMPoems by I adore the sun
I agree with hobber9, nice style of writing and nice structure to your poem, take care and keep strong, 10
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LilliQuinn
FFP Rookie

Ireland
16 Posts

Posted - 08/17/2013 :  8:06:45 PMPoems by LilliQuinn
Thank you so much:)
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LilliQuinn
FFP Rookie

Ireland
16 Posts

Posted - 08/17/2013 :  8:10:31 PMPoems by LilliQuinn
Thank you so much:)
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