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barbie101
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India
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Posted - 02/14/2014 :  02:50:21 AMbarbie101's Poems
Every girl,every women loves a TEA PARTY!

I had a little tea party,
in the afternoon,
baked some cookies
and some yummy sandwiches.
Took out my new gown,
dressed myself in loads of jewels.
Applied a ton of make-up
to look I'm freshed-up.
I called by the guest,
by the text,to enjoy the Tea Party.
We held the cup and said ''cheers''!
And everyone had enjoyed the Tea Party.




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barbie101
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India
78 Posts

Posted - 02/14/2014 :  02:53:17 AMPoems by barbie101
Please comment ur opinion so that I can improve :)
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Debayan Das
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India
327 Posts

Posted - 02/18/2014 :  11:22:41 AMPoems by Debayan Das
i think the ending could be better if u rhyme it up with cheers or use something else rhyme with party.:)
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barbie101
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India
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Posted - 02/20/2014 :  12:56:12 AMPoems by barbie101
thank u,this helps me a lot :)
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