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A Lovely Sonnet

 
 
 
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Ronnie Doe
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Posted - 02/25/2014 :  11:26:52 AMRonnie Doe's Poems
A Lovely Sonnet

It I could write a lovely sonnet
What a wonderful blessing it would be
With a pen in hand and thoughts so honest
I would diversify my poetry

To go with the odes I share with the world
In addition to all my love ballads
A lovely sonnet would impress the girls
If they believed what they read was valid

As a poet out of his comfort zone
I would be happy that I took a chance
With the thought I had come into my own
I'd gladly write about love and romance

I'd encase my heart in a gold locket
Oh if I could write a lovely sonnet







Edited by - Ronnie Doe on 02/26/2014 09:57:40 AM

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Prathamesh
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India
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Posted - 02/25/2014 :  11:55:53 AMPoems by Prathamesh
Sir, this is as evergreen as ever! You have written a thousand Sonnets!
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Terry c Lewis
FFP Poet Laureate

USA
12821 Posts

Posted - 02/25/2014 :  4:52:35 PMPoems by Terry c Lewis
Awesome sonnet, this so amazing, I appreciate greatness,
God bless.

Sis Terry
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Ronnie Doe
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USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 02/25/2014 :  5:05:41 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Thank you Prath for that compliment. Much appreciated.
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Ronnie Doe
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USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 02/25/2014 :  5:07:06 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Thank you very much Sis Terry got that awesome compliment.
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Evangeline
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USA
18785 Posts

Posted - 02/25/2014 :  5:52:15 PMPoems by Evangeline
"Shall I compare the to a summer's day?" (Shakespeare)

Ronnie, you do the sonnet justice.

Thou odes entice the laden heart
to blossom neath a quill of feather
Such care from thee to each impart
I'll drink thy ink from now to ever

Told ya my sonnets stink. Lol
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Ronnie Doe
FFP Moderator

USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 02/25/2014 :  6:03:48 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
I did it as suggested by Tumbleweed. 14 lines with lines 1-3 and 2-4 rhyming for 12 lines and the last two lines rhyming. Two different styles in 2 days. Definitely out of my comfort zone. Lol
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Ronnie Doe
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USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 02/25/2014 :  6:04:23 PMPoems by Ronnie Doe
P.S. Your sonnets don't stink.
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Evangeline
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USA
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Posted - 02/25/2014 :  6:12:21 PMPoems by Evangeline
It is good to get out of your comfort zone now and then. That is a great way to continue to grow. Also keeps the reader on their toes....not knowing what to expect next.
As for the other style you tried...
Brilliant.
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Tumbleweed
FFP Poet Laureate

United Kingdom
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Posted - 02/25/2014 :  7:24:49 PMPoems by Tumbleweed
I've just seen this Ronnie, as I don't tend to stray from the 'All types of poetry' too often: A great sonnet buddy with all the boxes well and truly ticked.

Kudos

Bill

Edited by - Tumbleweed on 02/26/2014 04:45:12 AM
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Ronnie Doe
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USA
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Posted - 02/26/2014 :  04:29:36 AMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Thank you very much for the tips and for commenting Bill. I think I will try my hand at a few more.
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magicman
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Australia
18701 Posts

Posted - 02/28/2014 :  07:36:10 AMPoems by magicman
You wrote a lovely sonnet. Well done 10
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Ronnie Doe
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USA
21315 Posts

Posted - 02/28/2014 :  08:10:39 AMPoems by Ronnie Doe
Thanks again Bill
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windowguy
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United Kingdom
2594 Posts

Posted - 06/14/2014 :  3:03:27 PMPoems by windowguy
Great piece. Good to see you are spreading your poetic wings.
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