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Limericks and How They Work

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Wendy Cooper
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Posted - 08/18/2008 :  10:09:43 AM  Show Profile Send Wendy Cooper a Private Message  Reply with Quote
There once was a site on the Web
Which caused readers nothing but dread.
Along I came
Now nothing’s the same.
People view it and smile instead.

The limerick is a very structured 5 line poem. Originally, according to Wikipedia, limericks were a bit obscene, but that has changed with the times. The first, second and fifth lines, the longer lines, rhyme. The third and fourth shorter lines rhyme. (A-A-B-B-A)

Creating a limerick is not that hard. The first line usually introduces a person from a place, the third and forth lines have the comic twist and the last line a conclusion. An easy way to start is to make a list of words that rhyme after you set up the first line. For example, I had wanted to make a poem for my brother, Ted. I made a list of words rhyming with Ted:

Bed Instead
Bread Led
Red Fled
Read Lead
Fed Ned
Dread Wed

And so on….I put down the first line:

There was a sweet guy named Ted…after that it practically wrote itself.
Who would rather lead then be led
Along came Patty
Ted got a bit batty
And now he follows instead.

This is a poem and limericks especially lend themselves to poetic license. One of the best poets to use this device was Dr. Seuss. In How the Grinch Stole Christmas he talks about how the Grinch was in Cindy Lou Who’s house and he was taking her things.

“And the Grinch very nimbly
Stuffed all the presents one by one
Up the chim-bly”

Of course the word is chimney. Many times I have my 2nd graders correct me…I simply tell them chimney doesn’t rhyme with nimbly!

Words-places especially-can be made up to rhyme, as with this limerick (author unknown):

There once was a girl from Devrizes
Whose breasts were of 2 different sizes.
One was small
And of no use at all
The other was quite large and won prizes.

Is Devrizes a place? Who knows but the syllable count and rhyme work!

The bottom line is - limericks are fun and easy to write. Try it and see!

Ted L Glines
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Posted - 08/26/2008 :  06:58:33 AM  Show Profile  Visit Ted L Glines's Homepage Send Ted L Glines a Private Message  Reply with Quote
"Devrizes" appears to have been a surname in Jolly Olde Europe, perhaps a royal pip ...

Kids love limericks, especially if the topic is a little bit profane. Limericks about farts or slime will send them into gales of giggles. You can hear kids spouting limericks they have made up themselves - on the schoolyards and on the streets. Great poetry from the old masters will get a ho-hum in the 3rd grade, but a limerick will light up their laugh-buttons. Thus - limericks are the best way to introduce poetic expression to children.

Thanks for putting up this limerick forum, Wendy. It's jolly

Ted L Glines

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Wendy Cooper
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Posted - 08/26/2008 :  07:05:26 AM  Show Profile Send Wendy Cooper a Private Message  Reply with Quote
There once was a sweet guy named Ted
Who was really very book read.
He had smarts galore
Way too much to store
So he popped facts out of his head!

Wendy Baral Cooper

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Edited by - Wendy Cooper on 08/26/2008 08:14:30 AM
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Ted L Glines
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Posted - 08/26/2008 :  07:11:13 AM  Show Profile  Visit Ted L Glines's Homepage Send Ted L Glines a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hehehehehe ... I resemble that

And this is a wonderful example of how easy it is to improvise a limerick on the spot!

Ted L Glines

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divot
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Posted - 09/24/2009 :  08:05:33 AM  Show Profile Send divot a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Read instruction before you start. Thanks, took a few times but I think I have it
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