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Ronald Doe
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USA
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 Posted - 01/25/2009 : 12:20:42 AM
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Friends
As we go though life,
We all make mistakes.
We have ups and downs,
And we get bad breaks.
To get to the good,
We go through the bad.
And to be happy,
We must first be sad.
Now to have sadness,
We must feel the hurt.
And then have a friend,
To give us support.
To give us support,
When we are in pain.
For this will keep us,
From going insane.
Now to go insane,
In this day and age.
Is to have a heart,
Filled with so much rage.
To get rid of rage,
We must learn to live.
And we also must,
Learn how to forgive.
For us to forgive,
We must make amends.
To our enemies,
And not just our friends.
And to have a friend,
We must be a friend.
We must be honest,
And not just pretend.
For if a friendship,
Is meant to succeed.
Then we must be there,
In each other's need.
I guess I'm lucky,
For I have a friend.
Who has stuck by me,
Right up till the end.
My friend is loyal,
And my friend is true.
And that is because,
My true friend is you.
By Ronnie Doe |
Ronnie Doe
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Ted L Glines
Moderator
USA
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Posted - 01/25/2009 : 04:20:38 AM
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Neat -- the way you ran the cycle on this. Expertly done  |
Ted L Glines
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http://www.thewritingforum.net
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Sasha17
Average Member
USA
232 Posts |
Posted - 02/04/2009 : 3:02:21 PM
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| Very nicely written. You cover so many emotions and forgiveness is so important. I totally thought of my best friend while reading your poem. Good job! |
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johlie
Starting Member
Philippines
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Posted - 02/25/2009 : 11:33:27 PM
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| This poem is so nice that all the emotions that's floating in friendship is real. |
+johlie+ |
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Ronald Doe
Moderator
USA
1574 Posts |
Posted - 02/26/2009 : 08:04:09 AM
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| Thank You Johlie, Welcome to The Forum. can't wait to read some of your stuff. |
Ronnie Doe
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Sasha17
Average Member
USA
232 Posts |
Posted - 02/27/2009 : 03:58:22 AM
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| I really enjoyed reading your poem. I can totally relate to it with my best friend! |
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Ronald Doe
Moderator
USA
1574 Posts |
Posted - 02/27/2009 : 7:58:31 PM
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Thank you Sasha, did you like it so much that you read it twice or did you simply forget? regardless, thanks again. |
Ronnie Doe
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Sasha17
Average Member
USA
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Posted - 03/02/2009 : 3:47:19 PM
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| I did like your poem very much so I came back to read it again. I forgot that I had already commented on it on my first read! |
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Ronald Doe
Moderator
USA
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Posted - 03/02/2009 : 6:44:20 PM
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| That's all right. I'm glad you like it enough to read it twice. |
Ronnie Doe
www.thewritingforum.net |
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robert
Senior Member
Philippines
297 Posts |
Posted - 03/03/2009 : 02:12:20 AM
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| Wow, nice and neat.... It really express the real reason of having friends, to love and give support. |
a creation of ME - Roberto Alico Jr. |
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Ronald Doe
Moderator
USA
1574 Posts |
Posted - 03/03/2009 : 08:15:17 AM
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| Thanks for replying Robert, your comment is very well appreciated. |
Ronnie Doe
www.thewritingforum.net |
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Ju Bagles
New Member
USA
15 Posts |
Posted - 03/23/2009 : 02:27:01 AM
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| This is a beautiful poem about friendship. |
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Ronald Doe
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USA
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keisha_writer
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Posted - 04/15/2009 : 2:00:31 PM
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| I wish I had friends like yours!! I don't have that many close friends, but I do have good acqaintances!! I'm not really sure what to look for in a friend, but ur poem gives me hope on how to be a good friend. And maybe I'll find someone that will stick with me til the end!! At least Jesus is my friend and he's the best one I could ever have! Loved ur poem! |
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Ronald Doe
Moderator
USA
1574 Posts |
Posted - 04/15/2009 : 4:42:28 PM
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You better believe it. Jesus is your heavenly and your best friend. Don't forget, even though we'll probably never see each other (on Earth)we can be friends through the Forum. If your words touch my heart, and a make believe friend up here in Boston doesn't touch me in any way, aren't you a better friend. You be patient because Jesus has a plan for you. God bless, Ronnie
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Ronnie Doe
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G.Y.C.
Advanced Member
Philippines
591 Posts |
Posted - 07/09/2009 : 08:36:18 AM
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| All of us have that kind of friend, and i'm glad to have one!great poem!:) |
~YANA~
-If you love some1, u better prove it, 'coz if u don't they might not believe it.
For love is not a noun to be defined but a verb to be acted upon.- |
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Ronald Doe
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USA
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smiley
New Member
USA
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Posted - 09/19/2009 : 5:39:21 PM
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| nice! |
abby fernandeszx |
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Ronald Doe
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USA
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sandie.h
Starting Member
Australia
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Posted - 11/02/2009 : 09:20:52 AM
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nicely put together..
Thanks for letting me be your friend also..
Sandie.h |
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Ronald Doe
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USA
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twildone12
Average Member
USA
200 Posts |
Posted - 11/07/2009 : 7:00:12 PM
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| This is really good, and true, i love your writings, keep up the good work |
~Tiffany Louise~
What lies before us and what lies behind us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us |
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Ronald Doe
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USA
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alicia s.
Average Member
Panama
217 Posts |
Posted - 11/14/2009 : 5:40:56 PM
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Very nice!!
Great job, Ronnie!:) |
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Ronald Doe
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pongener
Junior Member
India
57 Posts |
Posted - 11/16/2009 : 3:07:28 PM
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| Many people have written poems about Friends and friendship and all the poems are good. But its is very difficult to write a poem like the one you have written. You definitely have the flow and anyone can relate to it. It was a joy to read a poem which has poetic techniques but easily understandable. Your poem is greatly appreciated. |
Pongener
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"Life is a profound poem written in prose" |
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Ronald Doe
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