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shamylove
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USA
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 Posted - 08/04/2009 : 12:51:11 PM
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i want to rip you to pieces
to make you feel the hurt i did
the moment you left me standing there looking like a dumby
i thought we were in love.
now im angry. filled with hate
i never knew this would be my fate...
i think i still love you tho,
no, wait no i dont i want you died i want you in pain.
i want you to feel the same.
cuz wen you left i felt like my death was coming, that i was near the end............
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love isnt finding finding someone you can live with.
itz about finding someone you cant life WITHOUT |
Edited by - shamylove on 08/04/2009 12:52:00 PM |
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DexterC
Starting Member
USA
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Posted - 08/05/2009 : 12:29:47 AM
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| good poem |
Dexter Carnes |
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G.Y.C.
Advanced Member
Philippines
591 Posts |
Posted - 08/05/2009 : 08:37:48 AM
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| nice one!keep writing!:) |
~YANA~
-If you love some1, u better prove it, 'coz if u don't they might not believe it.
For love is not a noun to be defined but a verb to be acted upon.- |
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shamylove
Average Member
USA
128 Posts |
Posted - 08/05/2009 : 5:05:54 PM
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| thnx, |
love isnt finding finding someone you can live with.
itz about finding someone you cant life WITHOUT |
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Ronald Doe
Moderator
USA
1574 Posts |
Posted - 08/08/2009 : 10:17:32 PM
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| Shamy, a good poem on hating someone for hurting you. Hate is such a strong word as well as an emotion. Writing is a good way on comtrolling your anger until the situation doesn't hurt as much and you move on. Great job. |
Ronnie Doe
www.thewritingforum.net |
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YUNG L.O.V.E.
Average Member
USA
141 Posts |
Posted - 08/09/2009 : 05:28:47 AM
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| I LIKE THE POEM U CAN REALLY FEEL THE FEELINGS IN THE WORDS ....I FEEL BAD FOR THE PERSON U WROTE THIS TOWARDS LOL BUT I WOULDNT BLAME U FOR WRITING THIS IT SOUND LIKE HE REALLY HURT U!! |
YOUNG L.O.V.E.
DREAM AS IF
YOULL LIVE FOREVER
LIVE LIFE AS IF
YOULL DIE TOMORROW
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katiebubbles
New Member
United Kingdom
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Posted - 08/20/2009 : 8:05:29 PM
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| ur poem is way deep, u do kno how to express emotions thro writin, readin it has me understandin the hurt u've been thro, heartbreak is hurtful & does take time to heal, ur bound to feel hatred & anger & hurt towards whom u thought loved ya but that person obviously not the 1, & not worth it, but hey its got u writing great poems & this is away 2 let it all out & u will eventually get ova it. good poem, nice 1,keep it up.gr8 job on this 1 |
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shamylove
Average Member
USA
128 Posts |
Posted - 08/21/2009 : 12:23:30 AM
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thx katiebubbles.
i do enjoy writing and itz good 2knw ppl enjoy reading my stuff :) |
love isnt finding finding someone you can live with.
itz about finding someone you cant life WITHOUT |
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Sasha17
Average Member
USA
232 Posts |
Posted - 08/26/2009 : 11:58:59 AM
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| I loved the emotion...keep writing |
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XxSuicidal_LoverxX
New Member
USA
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Posted - 11/05/2009 : 07:20:46 AM
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| very great poem. i can feel the hatred. |
Dont let me die alone.... |
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keisha_writer
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Posted - 11/05/2009 : 2:09:39 PM
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| This is an awesome poem!! I can relate and I love how you expressed your anger!! |
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