Family Friend Poems
FFP Poetry Forums
Subscribe by Email  New Forum Posts via Email
Subscribe to RSS Feed RSS Feed
New Forum Posts via RSS.
Search the FFP Poetry Forum with Google
FFP Poetry Forums
Forum Home Register Active Topics Search FAQ
Username:
 Password:
Save Password
Forgot your Password?

Review a Poem Then post a Poem

Sad Poetry

Just like Dad

 All Forums
 Review a Poem Then post a Poem
 Sad Poetry
 Just like Dad		  New Topic  Reply to Topic
 Printer Friendly
Author Previous Topic Topic Next Topic
Share
  
  Current Topic Rating: Total Rating: 9 | Join the Forum to Rate this Topic at: FFP Poetry Forums  

skillgamer5
Starting Member

1 Posts
Posted - 09/10/2009 :  03:53:53 AM  Show Profile  Send skillgamer5 a Yahoo! Message Send skillgamer5 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
You were my idol, now you're gone.
You should be here, this is wrong.

I miss you more every day;
as i smoke these camel straights away.
I light em up, just like you;
cause suicide is my thing to.

I thought about you more today,
than I did on Saturday...

...Saturday was yesterday
this pain will never go away

Ronald Doe
Moderator

USA
1574 Posts
Posted - 10/06/2009 :  9:58:46 PM  Show Profile  Visit Ronald Doe's Homepage Send Ronald Doe a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Skill, obviously a very tough poem to write. Very well expressed. Short and to the point. I am sorry for your loss.
Ronnie Doe

www.thewritingforum.net
Go to Top of Page

pongener
Junior Member

India
57 Posts
Posted - 10/09/2009 :  12:03:30 AM  Show Profile Send pongener a Private Message  Reply with Quote
WOW!!!! thats the best amature poem I have ever read!!!!!! really touching... Love to u!
Pongener
-----------
"Life is a profound poem written in prose"
Go to Top of Page

PrincessPeach
Junior Member

USA
60 Posts
Posted - 10/19/2009 :  1:19:02 PM  Show Profile  Visit PrincessPeach's Homepage Send PrincessPeach a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Wow!!! great poem
still about ur dad well he's there for u
pray for him that god will see ur dad.
Go to Top of Page

glennmillington
Starting Member

United Kingdom
2 Posts
Posted - 11/07/2009 :  09:11:52 AM  Show Profile Send glennmillington a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Very good effort
Go to Top of Page

twildone12
Average Member

USA
200 Posts
Posted - 11/07/2009 :  9:20:00 PM  Show Profile  Visit twildone12's Homepage  Send twildone12 an AOL message Send twildone12 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
WOW AMAZING!!! sorry for your loss.. much love to you hun
Go to Top of Page

brokengirl299
New Member

USA
28 Posts
Posted - 11/09/2009 :  11:50:43 AM  Show Profile Send brokengirl299 a Private Message  Reply with Quote
That was amazing. really good poem. Your dad will forever be with you in your heart as long as you want him there. Here something that helped my sister deal with a 4 year olds death in the family. Listen to the song "holes in the floor of Heaven" its a country song it helps her remeber that KAtelynn can still see her and so can your dad. God bless and take care....
lovein him was not a misstake, he made me stronger, and he'll forever have my heart....

Sagie Pooh!
Go to Top of Page

rickwcolorado
Average Member

USA
123 Posts
Posted - 11/11/2009 :  10:52:59 AM  Show Profile  Send rickwcolorado an AOL message Send rickwcolorado a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Skill. I am so sorry for you loss. No words of wisdom here, just the acknowledgement that your pain is a hard thing to overcome. Your poem is very good and I understand the pain does not go away even as we move forward to the next day.
Go to Top of Page

Liz Koschitzke
New Member

Australia
6 Posts
Posted - 11/16/2009 :  7:18:55 PM  Show Profile  Send Liz Koschitzke an AOL message Send Liz Koschitzke a Private Message  Reply with Quote
bit depressing
I just want to put out some writings that may help people a little bit in some small way. We are all joined together, that is why the world is round.
Go to Top of Page
  Previous Topic Topic Next Topic  
 New Topic  Reply to Topic
 Printer Friendly
Jump To:
FFP Poetry Forums © 2006-09 Family Friend Poems Go To Top Of Page
Snitz Forums 2000

About Us |  Feedback |  Contact Us
Privacy Policy |  Link to us |  FAQ
Add us as A Friend on: MySpace or Facebook

The copyright of all posts on this forum belong to the individual authors.
All other material on this website is
Copyright 2006 - 2009 by Family Friend Poems.com