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alicia s.
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Panama
217 Posts
Posted - 09/17/2009 :  5:23:39 PM  Show Profile Send alicia s. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
You open the door
and let me inside
your heart, your life
into your world.

You open the door
and hold it close,
no one come and knock
it is just me and you.

You open the door
and waited for me
wanting to shut it
but only when I'm in.

You open the door
and nothing is like before.
I can see it through your eyes
that doesn't look at me like once ago.

You wait at the door
wanting me to leave
you don't want me like before
i didn't fight, i step out.

You open the door
and let me go,
you're done with me
you don't love me anymore.

You close the door
leaving me behind.
I cant enter anymore
i lose a chance with your love.

Now i wait at the door,
waiting and believing
you'll come again
and open for me the door.
Being single is synonim of happiness...:)
Edited by - alicia s. on 09/17/2009 5:26:59 PM

keisha_writer
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Posted - 10/16/2009 :  9:27:02 PM  Show Profile  Visit keisha_writer's Homepage Send keisha_writer a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Awww...this is so sad. I love your poem. I hope everything's okay.
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alicia s.
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Panama
217 Posts
Posted - 10/17/2009 :  7:54:44 PM  Show Profile Send alicia s. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thanks for comment Keisha!!
Well yes I hope that too...:)
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SilentScream
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USA
407 Posts
Posted - 10/24/2009 :  1:38:08 PM  Show Profile Send SilentScream a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thats sad. I love your poem.
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak, Sometimes you are just strong enough to let go.
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alicia s.
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Panama
217 Posts
Posted - 10/26/2009 :  11:25:38 PM  Show Profile Send alicia s. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thanks for commenting!!:)
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ChristyJ
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USA
107 Posts
Posted - 11/02/2009 :  5:24:59 PM  Show Profile  Visit ChristyJ's Homepage Send ChristyJ a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Interesting and sad! Nice poem!
The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me
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alicia s.
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Panama
217 Posts
Posted - 11/06/2009 :  7:33:20 PM  Show Profile Send alicia s. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thank you I really appreciate it!!:)
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