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Comfortable shoes

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divot
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Posted - 10/26/2009 :  5:00:19 PM  Show Profile Send divot a Private Message  Reply with Quote
This may sound mean and even cruel; hell you might think that I’m a fool
But the happiest thought I had today was the thought you’ve went away
I’m going now to met some friends and try to start my life again
Have a drink give the girls a wink, hell I might even shoot some pool
If theirs one thing in life you need its comfortable shoes

Comfortable shoes ones that fit
Ones that won’t turn your life to ****
Comfortable shoes to walk around
Ones that won’t bring you down

The thought of losing you never crossed my mind you seemed so happy to be mine
Maybe you stayed just out of habit, I guess true love we didn’t have it
Every thing as got its time, you are gone but I feel just fine
I can’t explain; what’s going on inside my brain, guess I’ll fine sum shoes that fit
If theirs one thing in life you need its comfortable shoes

Comfortable shoes to walk around
You never did want to settle down
Comfortable shoe I’ll find a pair
With someone who really cares

I hope you don’t come crawling back with your cloth in that garbage sack
You made my day now stay away; I’m not your fool to play
Love doesn’t live hear you made it clear, the cards been played that’s how they’re stacked
It doesn’t bother me to say you put on your running shoes today
If theirs one thing in life you need its comfortable shoes


Edited by - divot on 10/26/2009 5:01:33 PM

One If By Sea
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Posted - 11/03/2009 :  8:33:32 PM  Show Profile Send One If By Sea a Private Message  Reply with Quote
i love how you can write about anything and everything. that takes talent. all my poems are about the same thing. haha. great job again!
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