You said you loved me. That was a lie. You said you cared. That was a lie. You said you need me. That was a lie. Then, you met that guy. You said you hated me. So you said, "Go die!" What options do i got? I walked away crying. I was really hurt. So i looked down and said, "Bye..."
Hey great poem but heres a tip write like this it makes it easyer for the reader to read.
You said you loved me, That was a lie. You said you cared, That was a lie. You said you need me, That was a lie. Then you met that girl, You said you hated me. You said "Go die!", What options do i got? I walked away crying, I was really hurt, So i looked down, And said "bye"... btw welcome to the forums :)
This is a really heartfelt and beautiful poem. I'm sorry about what that girl did to you. But keep hope alive because you'll find someone who will love you for who you are. You just have to be patient and pray a lot. Prayer really does help and God is the best friend a teenager can ever have! He always listens to our hurt and pain and NEVER judges! Great poem and keep writing!
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Posted - 10/26/2009 : 7:00:53 PM
