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iTz Keisha Baby
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USA
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 Posted - 10/31/2009 : 06:07:08 AM
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She walked wearing a shirt that covered her chest,
She wore bands and bracelets to cover the rest.
She covered her legs, and she covered her neck.
Underneath of the clothes she was a horrible wreck.
She went home everyday to relieve all the stress.
The scars are one reason for the modest dress.
She cut and she cut and didnt wish to stop soon.
She cut at seven o'clock, eight o'clock, and at noon.
She slit once for her mom, and once for her dad.
She slit once for the happiness that she never had.
She may have cut once for you |
iTz Keisha Baby<3 |
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XxSuicidal_LoverxX
New Member
USA
15 Posts |
Posted - 11/01/2009 : 09:31:41 AM
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| nice poem. i cut myself and i hide them |
Dont let me die alone.... |
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iTz Keisha Baby
New Member
USA
43 Posts |
Posted - 11/01/2009 : 10:02:11 AM
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| I hate how people judge me but so do I... =/ |
iTz Keisha Baby<3 |
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twildone12
Average Member
USA
200 Posts |
Posted - 11/01/2009 : 9:39:44 PM
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| I love this poem, I am going through that right now, i am going through a really deep depression, i have been depressed for years now, but it is getting worse by the day. I hate how people judge me, they dont know what i am going through. but i love this poem |
~Tiffany Louise~
What lies before us and what lies behind us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us |
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iTz Keisha Baby
New Member
USA
43 Posts |
Posted - 11/01/2009 : 11:37:50 PM
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| Thank you soo much for commenting both of you. |
iTz Keisha Baby<3 |
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_lostinnocence_
Starting Member
New Zealand
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Posted - 11/02/2009 : 06:09:17 AM
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wow this poem is awsome it really describes how i feel and what i do. my mom hasnt even noticed even though i walk around in a t shirt some days. but never has she seen the scars or bleeding cuts on my arms and burns on my legs
thanks for sharing keep in touch. im only 16 |
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iTz Keisha Baby
New Member
USA
43 Posts |
Posted - 11/02/2009 : 08:54:18 AM
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| Hey thanks for reading my poem umm...my parents don't know either and I'm only 17. |
iTz Keisha Baby<3 |
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marie tully22
New Member
Ireland
9 Posts |
Posted - 11/02/2009 : 09:12:22 AM
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hi itzkeisha baby
i used to cut. everyone can see a broken leg or arm but no one can see the pain you carry inside. so then i realised with all these scars on my skin still no one could see. i was only hurting me again. i know i got relief at the time but then i felt guilty and sometimes silly then i told someone i got great support i haven't cut myself in 4 years i through away the blade
marie tully22 |
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PrincessPeach
Junior Member
USA
60 Posts |
Posted - 11/02/2009 : 1:52:18 PM
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great poem.
last 2 month ago i cut myself on my thighs
i wore my pants all the time and my parents didn't know i cut.
i cut with the knife.
soo.....i know how felt. r u new here. |
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iTz Keisha Baby
New Member
USA
43 Posts |
Posted - 11/03/2009 : 06:13:30 AM
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| Yes I am new here but my bf use to post here he told me to so I did. |
iTz Keisha Baby<3 |
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keisha_writer
Moderator
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Posted - 11/03/2009 : 11:49:02 AM
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| This is a deep and emotional poem. I've thought of cutting myself too, but I was too scared to do it. I know cutting myself wouldn't stop the pain and depression I was feeling inside. So I went to counseling instead and I felt a lot better about myself. |
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iTz Keisha Baby
New Member
USA
43 Posts |
Posted - 11/04/2009 : 03:49:24 AM
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| I've tried going to counseling but it never helped me. |
iTz Keisha Baby<3 |
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Emo_Love
New Member
USA
6 Posts |
Posted - 11/04/2009 : 10:31:50 PM
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wow.
i've been cutting myself for 3 years now and i hate how people judge me on it.
but the main people who make me do it is my family.
i completly understand your poem and i absolutly love it. |
-Alexis Renee~ |
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chapzgothlove
New Member
12 Posts |
Posted - 11/06/2009 : 5:16:44 PM
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im only 13 and iv never cut but i was so close.
i was soo depressed i no how you feel dude. and yea my friend does tho and i hate how ppl juge her so much but thts y ya hav to hide rite? yeah...... and its also a lota pressure for me too. im used to it now kinda but i hav no one to talk to about it to. sigh yeah but im happy and shes sad. and my bein a christian and her an athiest is kinda makin her hate me now.......
oh yea counsaling is soo stupid. it never helps anything. |
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Edited by - chapzgothlove on 11/06/2009 5:18:31 PM |
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pongener
Junior Member
India
57 Posts |
Posted - 11/12/2009 : 1:58:07 PM
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| Please do not get me wrong, but I need to understand something here. I want to why people cut themselves..I have never done that and have never been with someone who does that. Its kinda creepy, sorry for that. I know it hurts, life is not fair always. But u have to protect yourself..there is no one but u. Not even ur best frnd or ur family. But urself. ITS JUST U. And whatever you r doing to you body hurts urself...so, please try not to cut urself...it gives nothin to u or to anyone (people who hurt u)...am sorry if i am misunderstood. |
Pongener
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"Life is a profound poem written in prose" |
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croutonlover
New Member
20 Posts |
Posted - 11/13/2009 : 1:43:56 PM
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| ok lisen "pongener" cutting is something nobody who hasnt been threw it cld understand, so unless u want ur face smashed, shut up. |
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pongener
Junior Member
India
57 Posts |
Posted - 11/13/2009 : 2:35:27 PM
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croutonlover -- u misunderstood me. Iam so sorry for that. May be its Ur age. Or sum other thing. I don't knw.
But I do not want my face smashed, esp by a 13 year old-I don't understand why u can be so rude.Neither do I understand what u actually meant by cutting is something nobody who hasnt been "threw" it cld understand. And anyway, it was not meant to u, it was for the poet who wrote the poem. If u feel that u have the right to shut my mouth (or whatever), u think u r superior and that is not my problem. That line u replied shows the way you are brought up.
God Bless You.
Thank You
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Pongener
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"Life is a profound poem written in prose" |
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laciejanelle
New Member
29 Posts |
Posted - 11/13/2009 : 8:50:24 PM
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i loved this poem
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iTz Keisha Baby
New Member
USA
43 Posts |
Posted - 11/15/2009 : 7:10:13 PM
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| Thank you everyone for commenting...and plz no more argueing thank you bye ppl. |
iTz Keisha Baby<3 |
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croutonlover
New Member
20 Posts |
Posted - 11/18/2009 : 09:12:03 AM
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| u dont understand bitch. u never will |
croutonsdramaqueen! |
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iTz Keisha Baby
New Member
USA
43 Posts |
Posted - 11/19/2009 : 8:00:36 PM
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| Croutonlover I'm asking you nicely not to do this so please stop. |
iTz Keisha Baby<3 |
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