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mickeymick
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Posted - 11/06/2009 :  1:37:58 PM  Show Profile  Visit mickeymick's Homepage  Send mickeymick an AOL message  Send mickeymick a Yahoo! Message Send mickeymick a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Pull the trigger,
The voice whispers.
The gun is pressed,
Against my temple.
The cold metal,
Against my head.

AS thoughts of you,
Flow through my memory,
I can't help it.

I pull the trigger,
A blast is heard.
As I wait to be clamied,
By death,
I see my mum cry.

As soon as i left,
That terrible place.
I was grabbed by God,
And brought to heaven.

From there i was forced to watch,
My casket be placed.
I was shocked.
You came.

Tears filled my eyes,
And i too,
Started to cry.

They lowered my casket,
Everyone placing white roses.
But you,
A single pink one stands out.

You walk away,
Your tears keep coming.

Now I wished,
I did't pull the trigger.

Makayla: Watch your time, you never know how much you have left.
Maggie: Boys fall for hoes!!!!!!!!!

Edited by - mickeymick on 11/06/2009 1:39:12 PM

delanie
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Posted - 11/06/2009 :  10:29:53 PM  Show Profile Send delanie a Private Message  Reply with Quote
I loved your poem! I can relate so well. This past while has been hard and your poem really made me stop and think.
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